big writing 10/5/11 draft 2

Dear,Expert

   My name is Trae Weldon and I am 11 years old. I go to Technology Engineering Science Leadership Academy (TESLA) located at Sana Rosa Beach Florida.

   Right now I am doing a project and my essential question is, "what is the ultimate living thing?" I chose humans (Homo sapiens).

  As part of our project we have experts check our work. I need some help with my project and I was wondering if you would help me by looking at my work and giving your opinion on it. Here is the link http://bit.ly/p18tWT.

Thank you for taking time out of your schedule to read my letter and looking at my project.

Sincerely,
Trae Weldon
TESLA