Wednesday, October 26, 2011

10/26/11 big writing

   In our world today there are many endangered animals are becoming extinct because of illegal hunting,pollution,and other animals from other country invading. this should not be happening because endangered animals keep the natural order,the food chain in order,and because of the loss of these interesting animals going extinct.

   The first reason why we should save endangered animals is because they keep the natural order. Like if alligators went extinct then this bird that protects there eggs for protection from the alligator will then die out because all the animals would eat that bird and then the plants seeds would over populate from nothing eating it. Then a plant would get a virus and kill all the plants. That is why you want an animal to not go extinct.

   The second reason why we should save endangered animals is because they help the food chain.  If an animal eats deer and that animal dies then the deer will over populate. Then a deer will get a virus and all the other deer will get the virus and die. Which is really bad.

   The third reason why we should save endangered animals is because of the devastation. Like if pandas go extinct then billions of people will be devastated and will make everyone sad. However, it will help in a way because then people will be more careful and will start helping the animals.

     In our world today there are many endangered animals and now you know why. because of the natual order,food chain,and because of the loss of these great creatures. 

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

our play


 Hawaii Christmas disaster

Plot: A family of 4 goes to Hawaii to celebrate Christmas and it turns out they do not celebrate Christmas. So then they have to celebrate it there own way without any Christmas decorations.

characters: Mom-Dad-Young boy-older boy-Hawaii hotel manager

Dad: Well we are here in Hawaii kids.

young boy: well I want to come to the beach now!!!!

Mom: We will go to the beach later after we find our room and settle in.

older boy:Yeah we need to go get Christmas decorations for the hotel room from the front desk.

(Family goes into hotel together)

Dad:Hello do you guys have Christmas decorations.

hotel manager: sorry but we do not carry Christmas decorations because we do not celebrate Christmas.

Mom:well hey kids it is good that hawaii dosen’t celebrate

older boy:what the fussy whats who does not celebrate cristmas!!!

hotel manager: here is your room key you are 3-D.

(family goes to there room)

Dad:How are we going to celebrate Christmas now.

Older boy:what if we make Christmas trees and stuff out of trash and other things

(everyone thinks about it and then it says 1 day later)

Dad: well we made our Christmas tree out of metal poles and tin cans.

Older brother: I made Christmas ornaments out of rotten foods and string.

Mom:we are going to dinner now.

younger boy: yay yay dinner.

Wednesday, October 5, 2011

big writing 10/5/11 draft 2


Dear,Expert

   My name is Trae Weldon and I am 11 years old. I go to Technology Engineering Science Leadership Academy (TESLA) located at Sana Rosa Beach Florida.

   Right now I am doing a project and my essential question is, "what is the ultimate living thing?" I chose humans (Homo sapiens).

  As part of our project we have experts check our work. I need some help with my project and I was wondering if you would help me by looking at my work and giving your opinion on it. Here is the link http://bit.ly/p18tWT.

Thank you for taking time out of your schedule to read my letter and looking at my project.

Sincerely,
Trae Weldon
TESLA

big writing 10/5/11 draft 1

Dear,
Expert

   My name is Trae Weldon and I am 11 years old and I go to TESLA. Right now I am doing a project on the ultimate living thing and I chose humans. I need some help with my project and I was wondering if you would help me by looking at my work and giving your opinion on it. Here is the link http://bit.ly/p0Lf33. Thank you for taking time out of your schedule to read my letter and looking at my project.

Sincerely,
Trae Weldon