Thursday, April 26, 2012

big writing 4/27/2012 wip

   Have you ever seen the Washington national cathedral? well I have seen allot of pictures and it is beautiful! I think you will live it because it is beautiful,has allot of importance,and has allot of background. I bet you want to know allot more.

   I think the Washington national cathedral is very cool because of how beautiful it is. Just search it up and look at some pictures of it I mean its beautiful. The stained windows are pieces of art and the architect that made it is amazing. then if you look at the pew it is absolutely beautiful with all the stained glass and chairs. I remember seeing pictures of the Washington national cathedral and thinking it was beautiful it was. I think the Washington national cathedral is beautiful.

   If you look into the Washington national cathedral you will find out that there is allot of background to it.

Monday, April 16, 2012

Big writing THE IRON CLAW wip

                         THE IRON CLAW


                                                   Chapter 1 the first stand
   I woke up covered in dirt and blood. I find it a relief that I just woke up I mean heck I wouldn't care if I woke up covered in worms. I decided to step outside of the bunker to find out that everyone was wiped out. All over the floor dead people just laid there. I was in a panic to find out what happened when I found a journal on the floor. I started to read the final pages of the notebook to find out what just happened. Then I started reading this mans journal (go to note 1 and read the soldiers journal). Then I realize that the bomb rumor must be true for all these people to be dead. suddenly I start to see a man start to get up. I start  yelling to him to see if he is ok but then I realize that half his head is gone. The dead are living! the dead man starts to run at me and I start to run away. Then I trip over a stump and fall on a M14. I pick it up and I start to shoot at the dead man. It takes a whole clip to make him fall to the ground finally dead. 

   I start to search around looking for a few clip and I end up finding ten clips. I start to search around the bunker to find a backpack,some food


                                                         Note 1 the soldiers journal
                                                                                Day 50
Me and my troops have been stuck out here for too long. they said we were going home 2 weeks ago but I guess they lied. There is lots of talk about the Nazi's making some kind of bomb that can wipe out everyone in a second. I hope all this talk isn't true...

Monday, April 9, 2012

Washington big writing draft 2


   Have you ever wanted to go to Washington DC? I know I really want to go to dc because I get to see the white house, I could see the president, and because it's a beautiful place. I bet you want to learn more about why I want to go to dc.

   You know why everyone knows where Washington DC is and what it's purpose is, it's because of the white house! The white house is where the president and his family lives and where they make very important decisions and speeches. If you have ever seen a picture of the outside you would see that it is a very beautiful and big place. It has a rose garden and a huge field to play in. I remember doing a project on the white house and I learned so much about the white house that it made me want to go even more. I would love to see the white house.

   Have you ever wanted to see the president? Well I think it would be cool to see the president and going to DC would be the hot spot to see him because well he lives there. I mean who doesn't want to see the man who runs the country and makes everything go how it does. Plus not that many people get to see the president and it would be a honor. I remember the time my grandmas friend went to DC and she got to see our president get in a helicopter and fly away. It would be cool to see the president.

   Have you ever seen pictures of around the white house and DC you would know its a beautiful place. There's a rose garden and a big nice flat area with trees placed in the best places plus there is the beautiful white house right smack in the middle. Then there is the buildings around it that makes DC look beautiful. Like that huge tower around the white house looks great. I remember seeing pictures of DC and thinking that this place looks beautiful. I love how DC looks.

   I would love to go to DC and now you know why. because if the white house,I could meet the president, and because of how beautiful dc is.

Washington big writing draft 1

   Have you ever wanted to go to Washington dc? I know I really want to go to dc because I get to see the white house, I could see the president, and because it's a beautiful place. I bet you want to learn more about why I want to go to dc.

   You know why everyone knows where Washington dc is and what it's purpose is, it's because of the white house! The white house is where the president and his family lives and where they make very important decisions and speeches. If you have ever seen a picture of the outside you would see that it is a very beautiful and big place. It has a rose garden and a huge field to play in. I remember doing a project on the white house and I learned so much about the white house that it made me want to go even more. I would love to see the white house.

   Have you ever wanted to see the president? Well I think it would be cool to see the president and going to dc would be the hot spot to see him because well he lives there. I mean who doesn't want to see the man who runs the country and makes everything go how it does. Plus not that many people get to see the president and it would be a honor. I remember the time my grandmas friend went to dc and she got to see our president get in a helicopter and fly away. It would be cool to see the president.

   Have you ever seen pictures of around the white house and dc you would know its a beautiful place. There's a rose garden and a big nice flat area with trees placed in the best places plus there is the beautiful white house right smack in the middle. Then there is the buildings around it that makes dc look beautiful. Like that huge tower around the white house looks great. I remember seeing pictures of dc and thinking that this place looks beautiful. I love how dc looks.

   I would love to go to dc and now you know why. because if the white house,I could meet the president, and Because of how beautiful dc is.

Wednesday, April 4, 2012

Why American government is so inportaint

Have you ever wondered why there is American government that controls the country? Well there is many reasons but I will just tell you three. The world would go into destruction, there would be no one to handle our problems and money, and who would talk to other country's. Let me tell you more about these reasons.

There is a huge reason for the government and that is to keep everything in order. So let's say there's a guy named bill and another guy named David. So bill is writing a paper that David hates. So david comes in and throws his computer on the floor and then stomps on it and leaves but before he leaves he tells bill that if he makes another writing that he does not like he will do the same thing he did to his computer to him. In that process he has just made his own government that makes him write papers David likes. But since we have a government with rules David could not do that to bill. I remember going to bay and a guy said that if I don't give him my football he will be mean to me and then I realized he was trying to make his own government and take over the play ground so all I had to say was that this is a free country and I don't have to give him my football. After that he left me alone. That is why we have a government to keep everything in order.

There is need for the government to handle our problems and money. See if we had a under educated guy handling our money and problems then we would be in deep trouble but since we have a well educated guy that gets elected by the people voting then that's good. All country's need a guy to choose what we invest in and what to do when a big problem comes up. It's like in every school there is the principle that gets to choose what they do and if they put money into a field trip or not. I remember playing the sims and I had to be careful with my people and make sure to use my money right and to fix problems.There will always be a person to handle our money and problems.

There is a need for a man or woman in every country to be able to talk to other country's and that is why the government has a president to talk to other country's. I mean if a average joe walked up to speak for America that would not be good but when the president of the united states walks up then we got some serious stuff. A president is like a chef of a tribe and the chef is the boss. I remember a minecraft server that had factions and I was the chef of mine and I had to make a agreement with the other faction's chef.Presidents are very helpful.

Government is extremely helpful in many situations like I talked about. I hope you agree with me about why the government is so important.