Wednesday, September 21, 2011

9/21/11 Big Writing Draft 2

    There are many extreme animals but the most extreme would have to be the human. The human has many great traits like our extremely smart brains,we are able to talk, and we are very strong. Let me explain more to you.

   The first reason why humans are the most extreme animal is because of our extremely smart brains. We are able to process many more thoughts and do more stuff than any other wild animals just because of this DNA strand in our noodle. This DNA strand allows us to do harder problems and to talk. I learned about this on history channel one day when I was 7. Without this change in our brain we would be acting just like raccoons scavenging for food and pooping where ever we want to.

   The second reason why humans are the most extreme animals is because we are able to talk. Without talking we would never be able to spread knowledge to each other and we would never survive. In the caveman times there was two types of humans. One was smarter and stronger but was not able to talk and the other type was weaker and dumber but could make some sounds. With that one change in their throat they were able to survive. Our teacher Mr. Randy told me about that.

   The third reason that humans are the most extreme animal is because we are very strong. mountain lions and bears might get stronger little by little but humans are able to get very strong in a month. It is because of our determination and hard work and animals just sit there and hunt every once in a while. That shows that humans are stronger than most animals.

   There are many extreme animals but the most extreme would have to be the human and now you know why.  That is because of our smart brains,we are able to talk,and we are very strong.

9/21/11 big writing

 

There are many extreme animals but the most extreme would have to be the human. The human has many great traits like our extremely smart brains,we are able to talk,and we are very strong. Let me explain more to you.




The first reason why humans are the most extreme animal is because of our extremely smart brains. We are able to process many more thoughts and do more stuff than any other wild animals just because of this DNA strand in our noodle. This DNA strand allows us to do harder problems and to talk. I learned about this on history channel one day when I was 7. so without this change in our brain we would be acting just like raccoon's scavenging for food and pooping where ever we want to.




The second reason why humans are the most extreme animals is because we are able to talk. Without talking we would never be able to spread knowledge to each other and we would never survive.In the caveman times there was two types of humans. One was smarter and stronger but was not able to talk and the other type was weaker and dumber but could make some sounds. So with that one change in there throat they were able to survive. Our teacher Mr. Randy told me about that.




The third reason that humans are the most extreme animal is because we are very strong. Mountain lions and Bears Might get stronger little by little but humans are able to get very strong in a month.It is because of our determination and hard work and animals just sit there and hunt every once in a while.so that shows that humans are stronger.




There are many extreme animals but the most extreme would have to be the human and now you know why. Because of their smart brains,we are able to talk,and we are very strong.

Wednesday, September 14, 2011

A essential question is the main topic of the project or what you are testing for.A example is like will a balloon float if hot air is put into it or will a potato give off electricity.

9/14/11 big writing #6 draft 2


   There are many good inventions but the best would have to be the alienware.Without the alienware the gamer's of the world would have to deal with lag,computer crashes,and too many bills to count. That is why the alienware is the best invention.

   Without the alienware there would be so much lag. Nobody would like to play video games because of lag and then Sony and pop cap would go bankrupt. Also the alienware has an ultimate video card and the best hard drive around. Your games will never lag with this hard drive and video card.

  Without the alienware we would have to deal with computer crashes. It has so much memory that it will never go into overdrive and crash. Also, instead of it never updating when you buy it, updates its' self. It just gets newer and newer so it will never become old.

   Without the alienware we would be paying allot of bill. With alienware it hardly ever breaks. The only way to break it is to hit it with a club or something so you can save up on that money for new games. Then you can have more fun with friends.

There are many good inventions but the best would have to be the alienware and now you know why. because you do not have to deal with lag,computer crashes,and too many bills to count.

9/14/11 big writing #6 draft 1

   There are many good inventions but the best would have to be the alienware.Without the alienware the gamer's of the world would have to deal with lag,computer crashes,and too many bills to count.That is why the alienware is the best invention.

   Without the alienware there would be so much lag.Nobody would like to play video games because of lag and then Sony and pop cap would go bankrupt.But the alienware has a ultimate video card and the best hard drive around.Your games will never lag with this hard drive and video card.

  without the alienware we would have to deal with computer crashes but it has so much memory that it will never go into overdrive and crash.Then instead of it never updating when you buy it updates it's self and it just gets newer and newer.so it will never become old.

   Without the alienware we would be paying allot of bills but with alienware it hardly ever breaks.The only way to break it is to hit it with a club or something.so you can save up on that money for new games.So you can have more fun with friends.

There are many good inventions but the best would have to be the alienware and now you know why.because you do not have to deal with lag,computer crashes,and too many bills to count.

Tuesday, September 13, 2011

9/13/11

a project I want to do is a jet powered rocket and the essential question is will a homemade jet engine rocket work.

Wednesday, September 7, 2011

9/7/11 big writing #5 draft 1

                                                 Poking The Sky Part 1

   On the date 9/12/2025 3 people who are Kenny the robot dog,Goo the big blue slime,and Krab the crab cake.They set on the magical adventure to find the three keys to Macintoshia.There story begins here.

   "Hey guys do we have everything?" said Goo."Yep we have the three maps,swords,and 9 UP cola"said Kenny."Guys get in the car" said Krab.After everyone got in the 7-11 space rocket car they flew off to the first key."What is the first key anyway Krab?" said Goo."It is the magic banana" said Krab."This banana has the power to shoot darts from it" said Krab."That is one funky banana" said Kenny.

   "We're here" said Krab."WHAT!" said Kenny."WE'RE HERE!!!" said Krab.Krab slammed on the breaks and everybody hit the windshield flat as a pancake."Welcome to monkey corp" said Krab.As there were sneaking they heard people training with darts and boomerangs.Some of them had glue guns and some were shooting lasers."look at that symbol" said Kenny.It showed a money in a ridiculous blue and red tights with a red balloon under it's foot and a dart in one hand and a pineapple in the other."What a weird symbol" said Goo.
While they were walking they trip on a wire and alarms start going off."RUN!!!" said Krab.Suddenly darts start flying out the walls and they hear big foot steps.They start running as fast as they can."I can see something glowing" said Goo.Far away they can barely see a shape of a banana."I can see the banana"said Kenny.Suddenly they hear  loud screeches and lasers.When they turned around they see three monkeys that look like the monkey on the symbol."SUPER MONKEY STRIKE!!!" said one of the monkeys."OH %$#^!!!" said Goo. They look forward and see the golden banana.When they jump to grab it something grabs there ankles and pulls them back.Then everything went black.

   They all wake up to be slapped by a banana.When everything was clear they could see a money in a general suit with the three super monkeys."My name is Sgt. Banana"said Sgt. Banana.Then he slapped them all with a banana."We put your vehicle in the corner of confessing" said Sgt. Banana.When they looked where he was pointing they saw their car crying."I ate Goo's cookie and destroyed Krab's O pod!" said 7-11 space rocket car."SO YOU ATE MY COOKIE!!!"said Goo.Then Kenny slapped him."OOOWWW!"said Goo."THAT'S IT!!!" said Goo.Then he started rumbling and turned into a giant blue dinosaur.Goo destroyed all the monkeys,grabed the golden banana,And then he switched back to slime form and got in the car and bolted."WE GOT THE BANANA" said Kenny."Whats next"said Goo."We must now get the antlers of Oak the hair jell using viking. said Krab.

   After five minutes of talking about there feeling the travelers find there selves on Hairgelia."What are we looking for here?" said Goo."The helmet of Oak" said Krab."That should be easy" said Goo sarcastically.While they are walking for five hours they find the castle of Hairgelia."FINALLY!!!" said Goo."stop complaining"said Kenny."Well you do not feel tired because your a robot" said Goo."Be quiet" said Krab.All they see is a five story battle castle(a castle with five story's filled with bad guys and on top the boss)made with mossy cobblestone,cobblestone,and stone."No use in looking at it lets go"said Krab.They start to walk to the door and when they open it seventy Dungeon pets and jelly knights attack."Destroy them!!!" said goo.Goo suddenly turns into a dinosaur and Krab starts growing giant steel claws and starts cutting people.Then Kenny starts turning blue. "I'm a firing my laser!!!" said Kenny. He then shoots a big giant blue laser and destroys everyone."Wow how did you do that" said Goo."I just used the power inside of me" said Kenny.

   Then they went though the next 3 levels doing the same thing and then they finally made it to Oak to get the antlers."Oak we are here for the antlers!" said Krab."Hahaha you can not take my antlers!" said Oak. "Fine then feel the wrath of my laser"said Kenny. Then when Kenny tried to fire his lazer he could not because his Laser power was drained."This is BAD!!!" said Kenny.Then Oak slammed the ground  with his big war hammer and everyone flew into the air.Then Oak slammed them with his war hammer flat as a pancake,put them in a pan,and cooked them into pancakes."Muhahaha I will eat you now!!!" said Oak.He first took a bite into Krab and then his face turned green."Ha you forgot that I am poisonous!!!" said Krab.Then Oak fell back deader then a door nail.Then they took his antlers,got back into the 7-11 space ship,and flew off to the third key.


   "What is the third key Krab?" said Kenny."It is the magic egg" said Krab."We must go to birdia" said Krab.After a week of playing boring car games They made it to birdia."Finally"said Kenny.When they got off the ship they could see a vast land of stone,glass,and some wood.There was also many sling shots everywhere."There's the egg" said Goo."That was easy"said Krab.Right when they picked it up nothing happend then they flew away."That was easy" said Goo."it's time to go to Macintoshia.

PART 2 COMING SOON