Wednesday, September 14, 2011

9/14/11 big writing #6 draft 2


   There are many good inventions but the best would have to be the alienware.Without the alienware the gamer's of the world would have to deal with lag,computer crashes,and too many bills to count. That is why the alienware is the best invention.

   Without the alienware there would be so much lag. Nobody would like to play video games because of lag and then Sony and pop cap would go bankrupt. Also the alienware has an ultimate video card and the best hard drive around. Your games will never lag with this hard drive and video card.

  Without the alienware we would have to deal with computer crashes. It has so much memory that it will never go into overdrive and crash. Also, instead of it never updating when you buy it, updates its' self. It just gets newer and newer so it will never become old.

   Without the alienware we would be paying allot of bill. With alienware it hardly ever breaks. The only way to break it is to hit it with a club or something so you can save up on that money for new games. Then you can have more fun with friends.

There are many good inventions but the best would have to be the alienware and now you know why. because you do not have to deal with lag,computer crashes,and too many bills to count.

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