Wednesday, September 21, 2011

9/21/11 Big Writing Draft 2

    There are many extreme animals but the most extreme would have to be the human. The human has many great traits like our extremely smart brains,we are able to talk, and we are very strong. Let me explain more to you.

   The first reason why humans are the most extreme animal is because of our extremely smart brains. We are able to process many more thoughts and do more stuff than any other wild animals just because of this DNA strand in our noodle. This DNA strand allows us to do harder problems and to talk. I learned about this on history channel one day when I was 7. Without this change in our brain we would be acting just like raccoons scavenging for food and pooping where ever we want to.

   The second reason why humans are the most extreme animals is because we are able to talk. Without talking we would never be able to spread knowledge to each other and we would never survive. In the caveman times there was two types of humans. One was smarter and stronger but was not able to talk and the other type was weaker and dumber but could make some sounds. With that one change in their throat they were able to survive. Our teacher Mr. Randy told me about that.

   The third reason that humans are the most extreme animal is because we are very strong. mountain lions and bears might get stronger little by little but humans are able to get very strong in a month. It is because of our determination and hard work and animals just sit there and hunt every once in a while. That shows that humans are stronger than most animals.

   There are many extreme animals but the most extreme would have to be the human and now you know why.  That is because of our smart brains,we are able to talk,and we are very strong.

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