Wednesday, February 13, 2013


Form
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Thesis sentence (driving question or sentence): How can we measure things that make life worthwhile 
Main idea 1: We could make a quiz to check
Main idea 2: We could use technology
Main idea 3: We could also use training for certain things
Main idea 1: We could make a quiz
Proof (1): the quiz would help with measuring unmeasurable stuff
Proof (2): It would accurately mesure the thing its based around
Illustration or research point (has a time word and research example): In the future we might have quizes for this stuff : Chip Conley said that allot of positive things can't be measured, so this might help with that.    
Conclusion (say your main idea again in a different and more interesting way) In the future people might be taking quizes around unmeasurable stuff.
   
Main idea 2: We could use technology
Proof (1): We have the technology for brain scanning and different mind things
Proof (2): This would help a lot with different things too if we invent differet
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Conclusion (say your main idea again in a different and more interesting way):
Main idea 3:
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Conclusion (say your main idea again in a different and more interesting way):
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