Wednesday, November 16, 2011

11/16/11 big writing

   Thanksgiving is great. Its great because I get to go with my dad to Birmingham and see all the sights, eat lots of food like turkey and ham, and meeting my cousins so we can do stuff together and go to fun places. Let me tell you more.

   The first thing I am looking forward to is the trip to Birmingham. I get to go with my dad and see all the sights like the big peach and all the iron around Birmingham. then when I get to our grandmas house and I am pooped I get to play with my cousins and partaaay!!! Like one time I found there basket ball and then we decided to play horse and I made a long shot and beat everyone. I love the trip to Birmingham.

   The second thing I am looking forward to is eating allot of food. When we eat we break out a really big turkey and mashed potatoes with butter and some veggies. Then for dessert we eat ice cream with fudge and brownies. After all that then we go outside and play tag and hide and seek. One time when we ate so much we started playing base ball and them my cousin Carson threw up all over my cousin Conner. What can't food do.

   The Third thing I am looking forward to is to meet my cousins. They are great at video games and they love to play base ball like me. When I come over we usually play outside and after a hour or two we go inside and eat a cosmic brownie and play video games for a while and then I try to teach them to skate (they usually epic fail when they try to get on). Like one time I was able to get Carson on the skate board but he then rode into the street and could not stop so he rammed into a bush and hurt himself. My cousins are awesome.

   Thanksgiving is great and now you know why. Because I get to go with my dad to Birmingham and see all the sights, eat lots of food like turkey and ham, and meeting my cousins so we can do stuff together and go to fun places.


Wednesday, November 9, 2011

11/9/11 big writing draft two


 I am thankful for many things but three things I am thankful for would have to be my hamsters for being sweet and insane, TESLA for showing me project based learning and for all the new friends, and my Mom for always being there and helping me.

   The first thing I am very thankful for is my hamster. It always is so fluffy and sweet and sometimes sleeps in my hand and then its insane because when I try to pick it up it runs all around in its cage. One day when I got back from a fishing tournament my mother and sister lost my hamster in the house and we tried to find it all day and the next day I found it in the hedge hog cage. My Hamster is insane.










 
    The second thing I am thankful for is T.E.S.L.A.. T.E.S.L.A. showed me project based learning which is way better than staring at a board and sleeping and drooling and for all the new friends I met like Nate. Like yesterday I presented and got over my fear of presenting. I love T.E.S.L.A..

   The third thing I am thankful for is my Mom. She is always there for me when things get bad and then she always helps me with homework and my room.like yesterday When we moved my mom helped me with setting up my bed. Moms are great.

  I an thankful for many things and know you know what I am thankful for and why. I am thankful because of my hamsters for being sweet and insane, TESLA for showing me project based learning and for all the new friends, and my Mom for always being there and helping me.





11/9/11 big writing draft one

    I am thankful for many things but three things I am thankful for would have to be my hamsters for being sweet and insane, TESLA for showing me project based learning and for all the new friends, and my Mom for always being there and helping me.

   The first thing I am very thankful for is my hamster. It always is so fluffy and sweet and sometimes sleeps in my hand and then its insane because when I try to pick it up it runs all around in its cage. One day when I got
back from a fishing tournament my mother and sister lost my hamster in the house and we tried to find it all day and the next day i found it in the hedge hog cage. my Hamster is insane.










    The second thing i am thankful for is T.E.S.L.A.. T.E.S.L.A. showed me project based learning which is way better than staring at a board and sleeping and drooling and for all the new friends I met like Nate. Like yesterday I presented and got over my fear of presenting. I love T.E.S.L.A..

   The third thing I am thankful for is my Mom. She is always there for me when things get bad and then she always helps me with homework and my room.like yesterday When we moved my mom helped me with setting up my bed. Moms are great.

  I an thankful for many things and know you know what I am thankful for and why. because of my hamsters for being sweet and insane, TESLA for showing me project based learning and for all the new friends, and my Mom for always being there and helping me.


 



Wednesday, October 26, 2011

10/26/11 big writing

   In our world today there are many endangered animals are becoming extinct because of illegal hunting,pollution,and other animals from other country invading. this should not be happening because endangered animals keep the natural order,the food chain in order,and because of the loss of these interesting animals going extinct.

   The first reason why we should save endangered animals is because they keep the natural order. Like if alligators went extinct then this bird that protects there eggs for protection from the alligator will then die out because all the animals would eat that bird and then the plants seeds would over populate from nothing eating it. Then a plant would get a virus and kill all the plants. That is why you want an animal to not go extinct.

   The second reason why we should save endangered animals is because they help the food chain.  If an animal eats deer and that animal dies then the deer will over populate. Then a deer will get a virus and all the other deer will get the virus and die. Which is really bad.

   The third reason why we should save endangered animals is because of the devastation. Like if pandas go extinct then billions of people will be devastated and will make everyone sad. However, it will help in a way because then people will be more careful and will start helping the animals.

     In our world today there are many endangered animals and now you know why. because of the natual order,food chain,and because of the loss of these great creatures. 

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

our play


 Hawaii Christmas disaster

Plot: A family of 4 goes to Hawaii to celebrate Christmas and it turns out they do not celebrate Christmas. So then they have to celebrate it there own way without any Christmas decorations.

characters: Mom-Dad-Young boy-older boy-Hawaii hotel manager

Dad: Well we are here in Hawaii kids.

young boy: well I want to come to the beach now!!!!

Mom: We will go to the beach later after we find our room and settle in.

older boy:Yeah we need to go get Christmas decorations for the hotel room from the front desk.

(Family goes into hotel together)

Dad:Hello do you guys have Christmas decorations.

hotel manager: sorry but we do not carry Christmas decorations because we do not celebrate Christmas.

Mom:well hey kids it is good that hawaii dosen’t celebrate

older boy:what the fussy whats who does not celebrate cristmas!!!

hotel manager: here is your room key you are 3-D.

(family goes to there room)

Dad:How are we going to celebrate Christmas now.

Older boy:what if we make Christmas trees and stuff out of trash and other things

(everyone thinks about it and then it says 1 day later)

Dad: well we made our Christmas tree out of metal poles and tin cans.

Older brother: I made Christmas ornaments out of rotten foods and string.

Mom:we are going to dinner now.

younger boy: yay yay dinner.

Wednesday, October 5, 2011

big writing 10/5/11 draft 2


Dear,Expert

   My name is Trae Weldon and I am 11 years old. I go to Technology Engineering Science Leadership Academy (TESLA) located at Sana Rosa Beach Florida.

   Right now I am doing a project and my essential question is, "what is the ultimate living thing?" I chose humans (Homo sapiens).

  As part of our project we have experts check our work. I need some help with my project and I was wondering if you would help me by looking at my work and giving your opinion on it. Here is the link http://bit.ly/p18tWT.

Thank you for taking time out of your schedule to read my letter and looking at my project.

Sincerely,
Trae Weldon
TESLA

big writing 10/5/11 draft 1

Dear,
Expert

   My name is Trae Weldon and I am 11 years old and I go to TESLA. Right now I am doing a project on the ultimate living thing and I chose humans. I need some help with my project and I was wondering if you would help me by looking at my work and giving your opinion on it. Here is the link http://bit.ly/p0Lf33. Thank you for taking time out of your schedule to read my letter and looking at my project.

Sincerely,
Trae Weldon