1/9/12 (FIRST 2012 POST :D) big writing

   There are many bridge's that are more than ordinary but some are extraordinary like the Banpo bridge in south Korea,Rolling bridge in united kingdom,and the oliveira bridge in Brazil. Let's learn more about these bridges.

   The first bridge is the Banpo bridge. It has 10,000 nozzles spraying out water beside the bridge on both sides. It also pumps out 190 tons of water each day but it is not wasting water because it goes strait into the lake. Every night every day it turns the water into different colors with lights and the bridge lights up too. This bridge is amazing.

   The second bridge is the Rolling bridge. What the rolling bridge does is exactly what the name says, it rolls up. It rolls up so boats can pass and people can get to the other side. during the day it has a sensor so it knows when to roll up when a boat is coming and when a person hits the button it rolls out so people can pass. It is truly a cool bridge.

   The third bridge is the oliveira bridge. It is the first ever suspension bridge that crosses into a x shape. this bridge is build over a bridge which is pretty cool and it is a bridgeception. everyday for everyone passing that bridge under the oliveira bridge must think looking up is very cool. This is my favorite bridge.

   There are many bridge's that are more than ordinary but some are extraordinary and now you know some of the extraordinary bridges. The Banpo bridge in south Korea,Rolling bridge in united kingdom,and the oliveira bridge in Brazil.

12/14/11 big writing

                                   Hunt For The Golden Apple

                                                    by Trae Weldon

    It was a nice Friday morning when Grim and Johnny found a map with instructions. On the back it said that the map was a map to get to the golden apple that grants internal life. so our story begins here in the eternal forest at the start of the map.

   We decided to stop for a lunch break before we went on. "Hey Grim where is the map", said Johnny. "Its in my bag", said Grim. Grim pulled out the map and looked at how far they were from the golden apple. "we got to go though 3 more places to get there", said Grim. "well what are we and what are the places we have to pass", said Johnny. " We have to go though orc pass, get though the ice palace, and then make it to the golden temple of the Inca people", said Grim. 

   after they eat there lunch they take a long walk to get to the orc pass. when they get there they find themselves in a pit trap set for them. "What happened", said johnny. " Oh I don't know I think we FELL IN A PIT", screamed Grim. " calm down", said Johnny. suddenly a giant hand came down and picked up Grim and Johnny,when they get out of the pit they found out that a orc picked them up. " Thank you for saving us you big hairy orc ", said Grim. "RAAAAAAAAAAWRG!!!" the orc picked them up and then chucked them on the ground but right before he stomped on them Grim and Johnny rolled out of the way and pulled out there iron swords and Hide shields then they were ready to fight. "bring it", said Grim. Then Grim cut the orc's leg and he fell to his knees then he threw a unstable potion at him and he turned to dust.

   After they destroyed that big orc they went along when the weather changed drastically to -45. "why is it so cold", said Johnny. " Because we are at the ice palace", said Grim. They walked into the ice palace to find 3 ice guards at the exit to the bridge that takes them to the golden temple of the Inca people. "None shall pass", said one of the ice guards. "well then i guess we will just have to fight you", said Johnny. suddenly  the ice guards have ice knuckles and then they start chasing Grim and Johnny. Then grim and Johnny start to trow fire bombs and all the ice guards melt. "that was a close one" said Johnny.

   Then grim and Johnny after a long walk make it to the temple to find the golden apple on the top of a shrine and they grab it and take a bite. but then it does something horrible. It makes grim and johnny teleport to another world.

                                      .... To be continued

11/30/11 big writing draft 2

    Many people think cold weather is bad and many people think it is good. I think it is very good because of the nice weather,Christmas,and the snow. Let me tell you more.

   One reason why I like cold weather is because of the very nice weather. I love to go outside and not have to expect that my shoes are melting into the pavement. I like it when it is nice and cold but not too cold that water freezes out there. The cold weather makes it easier to run and hike. One day I went outside into the cold outside and the dew on the grass froze into ice. Cold weather is great.

   The second reason why I like cold weather is because of Christmas. I love it when you wake up and there are thousands of toys for you! Then you get to tear into them and you get a bunch of good stuff :P. Then after you play with it for a hour you get to eat waffles and milk and then go to bed. One year I got a computer for Christmas and I was so excited. I love Christmas.

   The last reason why I like cold weather is because of the snow. I have never seen snow but this Christmas I am going to see snow and have a big snow ball fight with a giant snow fort. Then I am going to own everyone !!! One time we almost went to go see snow and did not and I was so angry that day. I would love to see snow.

    Many people think cold weather is bad and many people think it is good but I think it is good and now you know why. Because of nice weather,Christmas,and the snow.

11/30/11 big writing drapt one

   Many people think cold weather is bad and many people think it is good. I think it is very good because of the nice weather,Christmas,and the snow. Let me tell you more.

   One reason why I like cold weather is because of the very nice weather. I love to go outside and not have to expect that my shoes are melting into the pavement. I like it when it is nice and cold but not too cold that water freezes out there. The cold weather makes it easier to run and hike. One day I went outside into the cold outside and the dew on the grass froze into ice. cold weather is great.

   The second reason why i like cold weather is because of Christmas. I love it when you wake up and there are thousands of toys for you! Then you get to tear into them and you get a bunch of good stuff :P. The after you play with it for a hour you get to eat waffles and milk and then go to bed. One year I got for Christmas an d got a new computer and almost died. I love Christmas.

   The last reason why I like cold weather is because of the snow. I have never seen snow but this Christmas I am going to see snow and have a big snow ball fight with a giant snow fort. Then i am going to own everyone !!! One time we almost went to go see snow and did not and I was so angry that day. I would love to see snow.

    Many people think cold weather is bad and many people think it is good but I think it is good and now you know why. Because of nice weather,Christmas,and the snow.

11/16/11 big writing

   Thanksgiving is great. Its great because I get to go with my dad to Birmingham and see all the sights, eat lots of food like turkey and ham, and meeting my cousins so we can do stuff together and go to fun places. Let me tell you more.

   The first thing I am looking forward to is the trip to Birmingham. I get to go with my dad and see all the sights like the big peach and all the iron around Birmingham. then when I get to our grandmas house and I am pooped I get to play with my cousins and partaaay!!! Like one time I found there basket ball and then we decided to play horse and I made a long shot and beat everyone. I love the trip to Birmingham.

   The second thing I am looking forward to is eating allot of food. When we eat we break out a really big turkey and mashed potatoes with butter and some veggies. Then for dessert we eat ice cream with fudge and brownies. After all that then we go outside and play tag and hide and seek. One time when we ate so much we started playing base ball and them my cousin Carson threw up all over my cousin Conner. What can't food do.

   The Third thing I am looking forward to is to meet my cousins. They are great at video games and they love to play base ball like me. When I come over we usually play outside and after a hour or two we go inside and eat a cosmic brownie and play video games for a while and then I try to teach them to skate (they usually epic fail when they try to get on). Like one time I was able to get Carson on the skate board but he then rode into the street and could not stop so he rammed into a bush and hurt himself. My cousins are awesome.

   Thanksgiving is great and now you know why. Because I get to go with my dad to Birmingham and see all the sights, eat lots of food like turkey and ham, and meeting my cousins so we can do stuff together and go to fun places.

11/9/11 big writing draft two

 I am thankful for many things but three things I am thankful for would have to be my hamsters for being sweet and insane, TESLA for showing me project based learning and for all the new friends, and my Mom for always being there and helping me.

   The first thing I am very thankful for is my hamster. It always is so fluffy and sweet and sometimes sleeps in my hand and then its insane because when I try to pick it up it runs all around in its cage. One day when I got back from a fishing tournament my mother and sister lost my hamster in the house and we tried to find it all day and the next day I found it in the hedge hog cage. My Hamster is insane.










 
    The second thing I am thankful for is T.E.S.L.A.. T.E.S.L.A. showed me project based learning which is way better than staring at a board and sleeping and drooling and for all the new friends I met like Nate. Like yesterday I presented and got over my fear of presenting. I love T.E.S.L.A..

   The third thing I am thankful for is my Mom. She is always there for me when things get bad and then she always helps me with homework and my room.like yesterday When we moved my mom helped me with setting up my bed. Moms are great.

  I an thankful for many things and know you know what I am thankful for and why. I am thankful because of my hamsters for being sweet and insane, TESLA for showing me project based learning and for all the new friends, and my Mom for always being there and helping me.

11/9/11 big writing draft one

    I am thankful for many things but three things I am thankful for would have to be my hamsters for being sweet and insane, TESLA for showing me project based learning and for all the new friends, and my Mom for always being there and helping me.

   The first thing I am very thankful for is my hamster. It always is so fluffy and sweet and sometimes sleeps in my hand and then its insane because when I try to pick it up it runs all around in its cage. One day when I got
back from a fishing tournament my mother and sister lost my hamster in the house and we tried to find it all day and the next day i found it in the hedge hog cage. my Hamster is insane.










    The second thing i am thankful for is T.E.S.L.A.. T.E.S.L.A. showed me project based learning which is way better than staring at a board and sleeping and drooling and for all the new friends I met like Nate. Like yesterday I presented and got over my fear of presenting. I love T.E.S.L.A..

   The third thing I am thankful for is my Mom. She is always there for me when things get bad and then she always helps me with homework and my room.like yesterday When we moved my mom helped me with setting up my bed. Moms are great.

  I an thankful for many things and know you know what I am thankful for and why. because of my hamsters for being sweet and insane, TESLA for showing me project based learning and for all the new friends, and my Mom for always being there and helping me.