a story

   It was a gloomy night when I entered the mansion. inside was a big room with stairs going up to the second floor. on the floor was a pinkish gunk mixed with red and a chandelier hardly working in the center of the room dangling from the ceiling. I went up the stairs to the second floor to find colossal claw marks on the red stripped wall. next to that was a big door. I tried to open it but it was locked. I knew I needed to get into this room but I needed a key. I turned around to get a slight glimpse of a man wearing a suit. he disappeared when I turned around but that doesn't matter I still need that key. I walk down the stairs and when I get to the end I stop like I was just frozen solid. A huge chill goes down my spine as I stand still. It wears off after a few minutes and I continue on into the first floor. I start the look around to find a worn out door. when I try the handel it works. finally a door that works. 

   Inside was a smallish kitchen with a stove and oven in the room. there was also many drawers and cabinets filled with skillets and pots. when rummaging through the drawers I find a small box, inside the box was a key! maybe this will work on the door upstairs. then suddenly I'm shoved back 3 feet and everything starts to shake. then I hear the voice of a man saying get out and then it all suddenly stops. I get back up to my feet and walk out and then up the stairs to try the key. when I try the key on the door it works! inside was a office. it had a hardwood dest and a nice leather chair. there was also a fire place at the other end of the room. when I start rummaging through the desk to find anything useful as I start to hear a sound. when I look around I see the fireplace after all these years is working, because its on and something was beside it. it was tall shadowy figure. when he got closer I saw a red tie.


   I was frozen with fear as he approached me. I could hear his breathing as he got closer and closer. Then I saw his face. he was old, looked about 80 with blue eyes and grey hair. Then he was 5 feet away from me. I was frozen, I couldn't run then he reached down and was about to touch my face when he disappeared into a cloud of smoke. I was terrified. it took me 5 minutes to finally get up. then I saw something in the middle of the floor. it was a pice of paper, it was a map.


   On the map was the mansion and all the floors, from the look of it there are 5 and I'm on the second floor. The way to get to the third floor is to get to the main stairway in the back of the kitchen. As I leave the room I hear a very hushed noise, it sounded like a man saying don't go. As I finally make it to the kitchen in there everything was the same, nothing was moved. then as I walk towards the stairway I hear a load boom, it make me jump and shudder at the same time. something is in here.


   I grabbed a knife out of the cabinet and was ready to fight. then suddenly a big black rat thing jumped straight at me, as I got a closer look a saw that it had big teeth and giant claws. As it passed me it cut me in the arm, I could see he was readying for another jump, So I got my knife ready. He jumped at me with great speed, when he got close enough I knifed him. Right as the knife enters his skin he exploded into black smog.

under the sea story wip

   It is a nice monday morning when I decide to go to the ocean to swim with some friends. I call Darien and Larry to come with me to the ocean and they say ok and to pick them up at 5:00. so then I decide to take a nap and set my alarm to ring at 4:30. At 4:30 I hear my alarm ringing while I was having a great dream. It annoyed me a bit but then I remembered how much fun I'm going to have with my friends and it stopped bothering me. I then go grab my keys,bathing suit, and goggles. after all the things I need are in my backpack I jump in my truck and drive off to my friends house. I remember there address like the back of my hand, Darien lives at 223, sickimore street, and Larry lives at 312, herping street. I finally get to Darien's house to find that they is no parking spaces. so I just wait out in the road for him and eat some trail mix. I was there for 3 minutes for him to finally come out and hop in the car. We then drive off to Larry's house. after a 10 minute drive we finally get to Larry's house to see him sitting outside. He hops in and we drive off to the docks.

   When we finally get to the dock my friends are amazed by the boat I got. It was a huge boat with a great paint job of a flaming tiger. Then we see the captain and he see's us. He comes down to greet us, we tell him our names and he tells us his. his name is Rick but he says to call him captain seawater. He then hands us some life jackets and tells us to get on the boat

around the world story wip

   It was a normal friday morning like any other day. I was eating outside when I met my friend darrin to eat some ice cream. We were talking it up about slinky's when a huge explosion happend back at our house. We ran as fast as we could to see what happened when we saw a pod. it had green streaks through it and a nice light blue interior. Then the door opened and out came a purple giraffe and a green baby monkey. The first thing I noticed about the giraffe is that it had 2 rockets around its neck and the green baby monkey has some sort of key. Then me and darrin gasped when the giraffe started to talk. He said that he had no time to explain and to jump on his back. So of course we jumped on his back with the baby monkey and Then the rockets on his neck turn on and we fly away.

   The giraffe said that the first place we were going is to paris. I always wanted to go to paris but not on a flying giraffe with a green baby monkey. when we finally got there he told me to grab the ray gun in his pants and shoot that tree. I turned around to find he was wearing jeans that we stylish. I pulled out the ray gun and shot the tree. The tree started to rumble and then it turned into a gas station. The giraffe stopped there to get some gas for his rocket neck. he said we are going to china next.

   Me and Darrin got a candy bar while the baby monkey was drinking from the nozzle on the slushy machine. After we finished our candy bars and got the baby monkey we got on the rocket giraffe and flew off to china. There we saw lots of things and ate at a real Chinese restaurant. there I got dumplings with soy sause.  

   

wolf big writing draft 1

Some people say that wolves should be reintroduced into the wild but I say that there are ups and downs to this plan. I don't hate the idea of reintroducing wolves in fact I want them back but there is always minuses to things and I have 3 very good minuses I found and they are that they would not do well with other people, they will get poached, and they will eat garbage and other things and get hurt or die. let me tell you more.

   Wolves and people don't mix all the time. sometimes a human will mess with a wolf and the wolf will hurt the human or the human will hurt the wolf. Then there is the chance of the wolf getting rabies and going into public place's and hurting people. although the chance of a wolf hurting a human is low but the chance of a human hurting a wolf is fairly high. I think wolves are great but humans are a threat to them.

   Wolves fur is used in allot of clothing and if it is illegal to hunt wolves but the pay is high for wolf fur than people are going to poach. That will just kill allot of wolves and making them endangered again. That is a horribly bad thing and no one wants that to happen. I love wolves but I don't want to see them in pain.

   Wolves are very smart animals but there is lots of garbage and they might mistake garbage for food. there are thousands of animals that die a day because of them eating garbage and who's to say wolves will not eat garbage. Then many wolves will suffer because of this and the population will drop. I think wolves are amazing but I would hate to see them suffer.

   Some people say that wolves should be reintroduced into the wild but I say that there are ups and downs to this plan and now you know why. because thet would not do well with other people, they will get poached, and they will eat garbage and other things and get hurt or die.

wolf writing

   Wolfs are one of the strongest hunters I know. they look into a heard of animals, pick out the weakest one, and then get it out of the heard and attack its weak spot. Then they just keep on repeating that successful process until they die.

   The are allot different than other animals because when they mate they stay together forever until they die. the female wolves usually give birth once a year. they have 5 to 6 cubs at birth and they are blind and deaf for 7 weeks.

   What wolves eat is pretty much anything that has a pulse. they eat deer,bunnies,moose, and carabo. if you can think it they eat it.

5/8/12 draft 2

  Have you ever had a week free to do anything you wanted? I had one just last week and did 3 super cool things. I went to the beach, ate at my favorite ice cream place, and I got to eat at boar's head. Here let me tell you some more about what I did last week.

   I love to go to the beach and play in the water and the sand. I like to go out at night and see all the sand crabs and then catch them. Then I also like to see the sunset in the morning at the beach. I remember going to the beach and finding these streams around on the beach and playing in them. I love the beach.

   I love this one ice cream place by Tomas doughnuts because it is all home made and They have 15 different ways they prepare frozen banana and 4 different dips for ice cream! There ice cream taste amazing and when you get a chocolate dip with it it taste even better. Then there waffle cones are amazing on top of it all. I remember ordering a banana split and it was amazing with the rich caramel and the juicy strawberry. It is the best ice cream place.

   One of my favorite place's to eat is boar's head. It has amazing food and great service. My favorite food would have to be the baby back ribs with french fries and a coke. Then there is also the other dishes I like allot like s-cargo and the fried lobster and alligator. I remember when me,my dad,my sister,my dad's friend,and my dad's friend's kid went to boar's head and we all had a great time. I like this place allot.

   Have you ever had a week free to do anything you wanted? Well I have and now you know what I did on my week off. I went to the beach, ate at my favorite ice cream place, and I got to eat at boar's head.

5/8/12 big writing draft 1

   have you ever had a week free to do anything you wanted? I had one just last week and did 3 super cool things. I went to the beach, ate at my favorite ice cream place, and I got to eat at boar's head. Here let me tell you some more about what I did last week.

   I love to go to the beach and play in the water and the sand. I like to go out at night and see all the sand crabs and then catch them. Then I also like to see the sunset in the morning at the beach. I remember going to the beach and finding these streams around on the beach and playing in them. I love the beach.

   I love this one ice cream place by Tomas doughnuts because it is all home made and They have 15 different ways they prepare frozen banana and 4 different dips for ice cream! There ice cream taste amazing and when you get a chocolate dip with it it taste even better. then there waffle cones are amazing on top of it all. I remember ordering a banana split and it was amazing with the rich caramel and the juicy strawberry. It is the best ice cream place.

   One of my favorite place's to eat is boar's head. It has amazing food and great service. My favorite food would have to be the baby back ribs with french fries and a coke. Then there is also the other dishes I like allot like s cargo and the fried lobster and alligator. I remember when me,my dad,my sister,my dad's friend,and my dad's friend's kid went to boar's head and we all had a great time. I like this place allot.

   Have you ever had a week free to do anything you wanted? Well I have and now you know what I did on my week off. I went to the beach, ate at my favorite ice cream place, and I got to eat at boar's head.